Visions of Sister Moon Pt. 2
February 25, 2010 by catvibe

 

st-francis-of-assisi-preaching-to-the-birds-posters1260740322_0 Canticle of the Saint Francis of Assisi” (Giovanni Bernardone, 1181-1226)

Visions of Sister Moon:

An entirely fictional and imagined correspondence between Claire and Francis of Assisi.  By Cat Vibert

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My Clair de Lune,

By the time you receive this I will be well on my way to Rome. And while I agree with you as to the structure of holiness of the church, surely you understand the political nature of things.  The church’s blessing is required in order to provide the funds necessary to establish the new order.  If we receive it, it will be a blessing to our community, which as you know, is sorely lacking in its relationship to Our Lord.  I tell you this to provide you with comfort and assurance.  I too have had visions, and I continue to be led by them to not cower before the majesty of the church, but to be humble and ask for what is needed for the good of Assisi and of the new order.  Assisi is to become a symbol for the future of all Christianity.  A day will come when our work with the animals and the land will be recognized by the peoples of the entire world as a potent reminder of our purpose as stewards in Our Lord’s dominion.   You need not worry, I will not be corrupted by the grandeur of things.  I will always wear only this simple brown cloth that you have woven for me, which in itself is the richest vestment any man could want.

As to your vision, your sight is an astounding revelation.  It is as clear to me as daylight shines its glorious light that you are indeed a bride to Our Lord.  My Claire who has visions under the light of the moon, the deer in your sight is a clear symbol that Our Lord has entered your visions and speaks through them, for only Our Lord can cast away demons while invoking compassion.  The water in the lake is the state of piety, as you know, the lack of piety has caused such horrors, and people are being led astray by claims of golden redemption.  Only tears of compassion and forgiveness can bring the people back to walk in the true path of Our Lord.  When that happens, and the people drink of those tears, they will once again follow.

When I return from Rome, my dear Claire, I ask you to allow me to receive you as a bride to Our Lord.  As to the conversation we had in regards to marriage the night we walked under the stars and dreamed of a home to tend the animals, I maintain that my love for you is as full as any heart can hold, but that is because you are so full of Our Lord.  We must never sully that love with earthly desires but must dedicate our lives together to serve Our Lord.  Only you will ever know how close my heart came to choosing an earthly wedding to you over the establishment of the new order.  My confused prayers have been answered with visions, and I must obey Our Lord.  But Claire, I need you by my side always, and so I ask you again, to take the holy vows.  Keep watch to your visions, you will find an answer there.

I will see you upon my return, and pray that you will keep safe.  Pray for our success. I am accompanied by eleven of my companions, and I do not think that any ill can befall us with the likes of them nearby.  Oh, lest I forget mon Claire, you would be amused to see the number of birds that have flocked to us and have joined us on our journey.   I have been feeding them. They have voracious appetites and so I imagine would follow even a devil if he carried a seed bag.  But you, my frail moon, you must keep care to stay pure as the light you are.  Until I return my love.

My love to you through the heart of Our Lord,

Francis

 

©2010 Catherine Vibert

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

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  1. February 26, 2010 by TWMNo Gravatar

    This letter reads like a tune up for a chant within the incense smoke of the great cathederal.

  2. February 26, 2010 by jason evansNo Gravatar

    I find this strangely sad.

    The writing and voice are so good. I'm buying the interaction as real.
    My recent post An Anxiety Study

  3. February 26, 2010 by NevineNo Gravatar

    Cat, I have to start by saying that your language is just incredible. This doesn't read as "entirely fictional" in any way. It reads as true, as real, as history. And it's filled with emotions that are trying to be silenced by a promise to a higher being that so exists for poor Francis… Honestly, Cat, if I didn't know this was fiction, and was reading it in a magazine, I would think it was a true correspondence. I'm so inside this monologue that sounds like a conversation, though there is no responding voice. Still, there is a responding spirit… Claire… I feel her spirit hovering over his words.

    You have such an amazing talent for the "unique". Don't ever stop creating like you create, Cat. And I'm looking forward to Part 3. And hey, have a beautiful weekend, too! :-)

    Nevine

  4. February 26, 2010 by karenNo Gravatar

    You might have found your genre! Historical fiction? You might want to think about it for developing into something more.
    My recent post The Blissful Seat

  5. February 27, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Jason, this is probably the best compliment from you I've ever had! It warms the cockles of my heart.

  6. February 27, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Vina, thank you so much. It really means a great deal to me to hear this feedback. I imagine it would have been a very odd position for Francis, being torn between his higher calling and being in love with Claire. As to the history aspect, although the correspondence is entirely fictional, I am following aspects from the actual history of Francis and Claire, in order to guide my writing so it has at least some semblance of believability. It's interesting to do that because if it were up to me, I'd have them disassociating with the church altogether and doing something entirely different, but then I'd have to change their names and no one would be able to relate anymore. :-) I'm finding it really fun to play within the form given by the actual events as 'recorded'.

  7. February 27, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    I think I might have too! I have always been fascinated with the mystics of any religion actually, but especially curious about the medieval Christian mystics. It was such a different view of spirituality then how things manifest now in the various branches of Christianity. And they were often quite the poets.

  8. February 27, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Mark, Hee hee, perhaps I will add sound effects to one of these posts. :-) Thanks for the idea!

  9. February 28, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    New comment system folks, I hope this one will cause less trouble! Thanks for your patience and for helping me sleuth the problems. Let me know if you are still having issues.

  10. February 28, 2010 by jozienNo Gravatar

    I am reading this while the full moon is appearing above the horizon…
    And i agree with all the above :)

  11. March 1, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Hi Jozien, It is a beautiful moon isn't it? Thank you!

  12. March 1, 2010 by RickNo Gravatar

    Wonderfully done, Catherine!! Bravo. Your writing voice is true and strong, and, more importantly, the world melted away as I read it to be replaced by your world of story. Congratulations.

  13. March 1, 2010 by Sarah HinaNo Gravatar

    Cat, you really have tapped into something here. The tension you're pulling from these saints, between their ideal and earthly love, is phenomenal. I feel the fine balance they're walking. I feel the dirt that would be waiting to sully any marriage union. This love is bigger than they are, and more perfect than they could hope to be.

    Reading this was so natural, so transportive, that I felt I was reading an authentic document (and you know I love letters! :-) ). The details are superb–I especially liked how Francis could be pragmatic when he had to be, while Claire was the true idealist. He's walking the road–she sees it in her dreams.

    I love this series. More, please.

  14. March 3, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Coming from you Rick, that is an awesome compliment!

  15. March 3, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    Now comes the ultimate question, where will the 'more' lead us? Mwuhahahaha! :-) I must get on that.

  16. March 3, 2010 by NevineNo Gravatar

    Hey, I'm just testing this new commenting thingy, Cat. I've got this “Warning” thing appearing in bright red and it is highly uninviting. Let's see if it works… here goes…

  17. March 3, 2010 by catvibeNo Gravatar

    It worked just fine, are you serious? That is weird! Tell me exactly what happens in an email so i can research it, k?

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